I’ve just completed the full read-through of my 80,000+ word draft. I decided NOT to edit as I read, but rather took hand written, chapter by chapter notes. A number of themes arose as I read back through each of my chapter notes. I thought it best to summarise these in bullet points so that I could print them out and keep them somewhere prominent when I do my editing.
At the moment, that somewhere prominent is on the ‘stickies’ app on my Mac – this way my notes can always travel with me. But I also like to have a print out to pin to my desk for easy reference.
Instead of focusing on the details unique to my WIP, I thought it would be more useful to others to make these generic, and to put them in a fun printable for anyone else who might struggle with these same areas!
These are the things I most often skim over, or perhaps don’t pay enough attention to when I’m head down and writing fast:
- SHOW don’t tell!
- Similes need to be appropriate to the text.
- Needs more inner monologue / emotions.
- Read dialogue aloud – does it sound authentic?
- The actions don’t suit the characters. They’re too generic or they all feel like the same person.
- The word choices aren’t appropriate to time / genre / character.
- Misnomers in the timelines and small details are inaccurate or inconsistent.
- Too many repetitive words.
Do any of these sounds familiar to you? If so, feel free to print out this poster and hang it somewhere easily visible (preferably your writing desk and not the back of the toilet door.)
Would it be useful if I showed you an excerpt of my WIP where these problems exist for me? Please let me know in the comments below.